Act2 scene2 review

Hello Harry,

Good work.

Instead of using ‘…’ (such as in this sentence: when I got home that night there was not a nice surprise waiting for me…the teacher had rung my parents), you can use the semi-colon.

The rest of the piece needs to be punctuated properly, please. That means using commas and full stops where it’s needed. There are also a few capital letters missing throughout the piece.

And it’s yours sincerely, not fatherly!