Sunday night
Romeo meets Juliet up stairs from the main hall where he ball is going on.
Romeo introduces hisself to the young Juliet Saying”if I profane with my unworthiest hand this holy shrine, the gentle sin is this,my lips two blushing pilgrims , ready stand to smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss” slowl
June 16, 2015 at 5:30 pm
A strong start Harry.
Can you see the difference in your punctuation at the end of your paragraph to the beginning? Give your reader time to think by breaking sentences down into manageable chunks (think about our work on clauses).
Target: Punctuate accurately.
November 19, 2013 at 12:23 pm
Thank you mr Waugh for your feed back and I will bare your ideas in mind